Wednesday, February 25, 2009

lEnGeNd 2

LiSa:

Once upon a time there was a girl called "Lisa" and she was 12 years old .She had a bad family, one day her uncles and aunts invite her to a night party, she came without person but when she enter at the party she saw her two uncles drunk and she said ,why are you drunk? and they kicked her and rape her so the next morning the uncles didn't know what to do so they kill the girl and trought her body to the river so her parents call the uncles and said where was the girl and they said she was in the house so the parents heared voices in the house meanwhile at in that house the parents ,they hear voices in her bedroom and the went up to her room and they saw a letter that says "mom and dad if you want to know the true come to the river"her parents did all the letter id meanwhile in the uncle's house they open the door and saw that the river was passing around the house then two hours later one of the uncles was slept and then the spirit of her put a beer on his body and with a candel that was with fire she fire up the house so his uncle died then the parents saw her in the river a cry so her parents know the notice and then the legend is that if some member of the family rape any girl she came to kill him or her and the family saw letters in the house saying the true!!

2 comments:

My SIx GrAdE BlOg said...

Hi, i think that this legend was so interesting, but you need to check some error about capital letter, and spelling, but i really like your legend.

comment by: Nicolas Poveda

Maria Alejandra Sierra and Nicolas Poveda said...

You have to inprove your spelling , the blogg is ok and I like your leyend.


comment by:MÂȘ Alejandra Sierra